View the Google Docs Story Videos posted by your peers and reply thoughtfully to at least 2 students. Provide a supported "Glow" and/or polite "Grow" and to the videos. Glow: 1. I enjoyed your video about _________ because... 2. I appreciated your video about ________. The part that resonated with me is ___________. 3. I loved your video about ____________. I especially thought the part of ___________ was __________. Grow: 1. Even though your video about _____________ had excellent points, I think that maybe you could ________ next time. 2. You have a ______________ video, however, be sure to _______________. Example: Bob, I enjoyed your vide about Canada because it showcased the multicultural population. You have a strong video, however, be sure to check your spelling next time.
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Joey
12/6/2013 05:39:05 am
I loved your video about Australia. I especially thought the part when Hollen said "Hey, that's almost my name!" was funny.
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Joey
12/6/2013 05:42:02 am
Even though your video about Australia had excellent points, I think that maybe you could add a little more information about your country next time.
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Cassidy
12/6/2013 06:36:42 am
Anthony I really like your details about your country it sounds like a very exciting country.
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Cassidy
12/6/2013 06:40:06 am
Anthony you have a really awesome video, however be sure to go over your spelling.
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Cassidy
12/6/2013 06:43:43 am
Michelle I enjoyed your video about Korea because you had really interesting facts.
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Cassidy
12/6/2013 06:45:39 am
Michelle you have an amazing video however go over your capitalization.
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Jaime
12/6/2013 06:52:03 am
I liked your video about when cassidy was saying Hmm... .
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Esmeralda
12/6/2013 07:19:32 am
Jamie, I think you can add the second character to talk more and next time add more detail.
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Ednaa
12/6/2013 07:24:40 am
GLOW: Justin you did good on your details and I liked your background sound.
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Ednaa
12/6/2013 07:38:27 am
GLOW:Glenda you did good on your details.
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Glenda
12/7/2013 07:51:09 am
I appreciated your video about Australia. The part that resonated with me is when Chris said A A A A A A A A A A H H H H H H H H H H H H H.
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Glenda
12/7/2013 07:57:17 am
I think you can work on that one period on the three paragraph.
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Glenda
12/7/2013 08:02:49 am
I thing that you did good on your story about China and spell the words.
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Bella
12/7/2013 11:53:08 pm
I appreciate your video about Germany. The part that resonated with me was the music. I really love the suspense music. Also, I liked how the story had your voice in it.
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Bella
12/7/2013 11:54:13 pm
You have a great video, but make sure to check the characters next time.
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Bella
12/7/2013 11:57:47 pm
Julia, I am amazed by your video and how you explained that there are many pretty buildings and statues.
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Bella
12/7/2013 11:58:47 pm
Julia, you have an excellent video, but make sure to check your punctuation.
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Julia
12/8/2013 12:31:17 am
Jay you have a great video, but you got off topic.
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Julia
12/8/2013 12:32:45 am
Jay, I thought it was funny when you said Samuel was laughing and then said, " No."
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Julia
12/8/2013 12:37:40 am
Bella, I liked the part where you put that Frodo said he was the best in the Lord of the Rings!
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Julia
12/8/2013 12:39:32 am
Bella, you put a opinion at the end that some,people might not agree with you know.
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Matt
12/8/2013 01:14:55 am
GLOW: I really like your video Samuel. I would give you a 4! I really liked it. GROW: There was one spelling mistake. You said I will give you a clues. There was a couple I's that needed to be capitalize but it was very good!
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Matt
12/8/2013 01:22:56 am
Glow: I liked your story Charles. Grow: I would Give it a three because you said is it is is it Germany and you said it not me.
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Lua
12/8/2013 01:32:40 am
Grow: At the end of your sentences you have to put a period and not a question mark.
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Jake
12/8/2013 01:40:11 am
Hey, Lua. Who are you talking about? Remember, we have to put the name of the person.
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Jake
12/8/2013 01:44:02 am
Grow: With Karla's story, I noticed that some of the spelling and punctuation was off, and also that you asked if they'd been to a country. The answer would have to be yes, because we're in the USA.
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Jake
12/8/2013 01:45:27 am
Glow: Your story went well because all of the comments were straight to the point.
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Jake
12/8/2013 01:55:47 am
Grow: Lua's story was good, but I wouldn't exactly say NewZealand is hidden. That doesn't make a lot of sense.
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Aleksa
12/8/2013 04:58:43 am
Flor I really enjoyed your story and here are your Grows and Glows.
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Aleksa
12/8/2013 05:18:54 am
Bella I really enjoyed reading your Google Docs story and here are your Glows and Grows.
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Aidan
12/8/2013 05:20:09 am
Jake I liked your story because I was really upset about something and it put me in a better mood.
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Aidan
12/8/2013 05:21:59 am
Jake one thing I think you need to work on is including all the characters because I only had one line. That is pretty much all you need to work on.
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Aidan
12/8/2013 05:24:52 am
Justin I liked your story about Troy because it had facts that I didn't even know about it
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Aidan
12/8/2013 05:26:15 am
Justin I think that you need to make it a little longer and reread over it because I saw a couple of mistakes. Otherwise that's it
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Michelle
12/8/2013 05:39:52 am
GROW: Julia I enjoyed your video about Italy because you had good facts and your characters where very interesting also you stayed and topic.
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Michelle
12/8/2013 05:42:57 am
GLOW: Savannah your video was very good. You had great facts and fun characters!
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Ryan
12/8/2013 06:44:46 am
Bella,I loved your video when Frodo said he was the best character in Lord of the Rings.
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Ryan
12/8/2013 06:48:39 am
Kohana, I was really amazed by all the facts about Japan. great job.
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Esmeralda
12/8/2013 07:03:32 am
Glow: Emily I liked your video about Argentina.
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samuel
12/8/2013 09:22:09 am
i liked how you had lots of clues
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samuel
12/8/2013 09:25:10 am
give more clues Charles?
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Jay
12/8/2013 12:54:00 pm
Dear Savannah,
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Justin
12/8/2013 11:58:39 pm
Aidan good job on the story but you ca work on deleting things and retyping it.
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Anthony
12/8/2013 11:58:59 pm
Ivanna i like your video because you give lots of details
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Justin
12/9/2013 12:03:08 am
Lua I like how you described things but be more careful what you type.
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Axel to Adrian
12/9/2013 12:10:09 am
I appreciated your video about Afghanistan. The part that I like was when you kept giving enough clues to make them find out about your country which is Afghanistan
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Savannah
12/9/2013 12:14:17 am
GLOW: Ednaa You did good on your video and gave some really good facts.
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Savannah
12/9/2013 12:16:14 am
GLOW: You gave a lot of detail.
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Emily
12/9/2013 01:42:18 am
GLOW:I like how gave a lot of hints.
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Emily
12/9/2013 01:44:11 am
It is for Aidan
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Omid
12/9/2013 01:44:18 am
Emily you did great but you have to add more detail.
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Emily
12/9/2013 01:45:50 am
GLOW:Savannah I like how you said that you can put your face in the food.
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Jenny
12/9/2013 01:46:38 am
I liked your names.you had no mistakes. it was good. I liked the clues.
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Omid
12/9/2013 01:48:09 am
Jake you had so much detail but your characters have to be nicer if Anthony saw that he would have his feelings hurt so be nicer.
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Flor
12/9/2013 04:04:36 am
Omid:
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Adrian
12/9/2013 04:07:36 am
Lua, Glow : I like how you said it was hidden that made it sound really cool
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Flor
12/9/2013 04:08:23 am
Michelle:
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Kohana
12/9/2013 12:20:16 pm
Axel:
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Jay
12/9/2013 11:54:30 pm
Matt,
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