View the Google Docs Story Videos posted by your peers and reply thoughtfully to at least 2 students. Provide a supported "Glow" and/or polite "Grow" and to the videos. Glow: 1. I enjoyed your video about _________ because... 2. I appreciated your video about ________. The part that resonated with me is ___________. 3. I loved your video about ____________. I especially thought the part of ___________ was __________. Grow: 1. Even though your video about _____________ had excellent points, I think that maybe you could ________ next time. 2. You have a ______________ video, however, be sure to _______________. Example: Bob, I enjoyed your vide about Canada because it showcased the multicultural population. You have a strong video, however, be sure to check your spelling next time. You can use the linked file below or CLICK HERE to access the Google Doc Links.
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Stacy
12/10/2013 06:43:03 am
Desteny i liked your video about Mexico
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Stacy
12/10/2013 06:48:13 am
Bess I really liked your video about Costa Rica because,it had a lot of detail and had an exact location!
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Bess
12/10/2013 11:33:11 pm
Stacy
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Anne
12/10/2013 07:44:31 am
I think you video about portugal was entertaining and a little different from the example. To improve apon your video I would have your characters say whether all those things you wondered are true or not.
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Gus
12/10/2013 07:56:30 am
Isaac I loved your video about Australia it had a lot of details. But I think that you made the story a little longer that it had to be.
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mercedez
12/10/2013 08:08:40 am
David g i really liked your video of Mexico because you gave alot of details but you should but spaces between the names
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Lizbeth
12/10/2013 08:45:27 am
Brisa I liked your video about the United Kingdom. My favorite part was when you said that the United Kingdom has the tallest Ferris wheel in the whole world. Next time you can add one more detail to make it a little more interesting.
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Lizbeth
12/10/2013 08:51:22 am
Claudia I loved how you mentioned that the pools in Mexico have game. It looks like a fun place. I think you messed up in the first sentence.
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Aaliah
12/10/2013 09:07:49 am
Riley I like how you explained what pitas are to Mr. Questions. But it would be better if you did not say the drippy food you should explain what it is so when people see your Google doc they are going to know
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Aaliah
12/10/2013 09:10:08 am
Claudia I liked how you said if they went or not. but you should not start with saying hi to someone. But other than that I like your story.
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Maggie
12/10/2013 09:20:01 am
Aaliah I liked that you added details about the beaches in Mexico, I think you should have said more about Mexico.
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Maggie
12/10/2013 09:24:25 am
Lizbeth I liked that you said things about the United Kingdom, you may want to check your writing.
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Eric
12/10/2013 09:56:24 am
Dustin, I couldn't see your story because the link went to Esmeralda's story.
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Eric
12/10/2013 09:58:44 am
Riley, I liked it, but can you add more details and put a space between your periods?
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Claudia
12/10/2013 10:02:19 am
1. I enjoyed your video about Australia because I want to go to Australia.
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Catherine
12/10/2013 10:04:10 am
Bess I love your story on Costa Rica. I especiall of their being rain forest was amazing.
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Claudia
12/10/2013 10:06:02 am
Lizbeth I like that little about United Kingdom I think that the country is bigger.
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catherine
12/10/2013 10:07:06 am
Bess even though your story had excellent end points i think maybe you could add more details next time
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catherine
12/10/2013 10:09:41 am
Rocio i think you should have gave more hints before Cynthia said Mexico
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catherine
12/10/2013 10:10:46 am
Rocio i really liked how you at least added some details at the begining
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Desteny
12/10/2013 10:26:48 am
Dallas, I really liked your story about Finland its really cool! I also liked how it had a lot of detail and juice sentences. I loved it and that is all I have to say :)
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David G
12/10/2013 10:27:00 am
Lizbeth I like how your story was but you had a little errors.
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David G
12/10/2013 10:31:59 am
Spencer you did great but you have to tell me more about France ok.
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Jacob
12/10/2013 10:45:54 am
1. Brisa i enjoyed your video about the united kingdom because you told a lot about it and it has good details.
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Katie
12/10/2013 10:51:39 am
Spencer, I enjoyed your video about France because it was very funny. I also like the way you guys wanted to go to france.
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Jacob
12/10/2013 10:53:22 am
1. Ricardo i enjoyed your video about Mexico it made me laugh but i like it because you have a funny story and because you put enough information.
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Katie
12/10/2013 10:56:04 am
Stacy, I liked your video because it was funny, all though, you can work on writing more things about Mexico.
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Anthony
12/10/2013 11:13:49 am
Matt something that I really like is how your characters emotions are it feels like up beet and happy. Something that you need to work on is your characters description of Portugal.
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Anthony
12/10/2013 11:23:25 am
Rashad That was Amazing I really liked your Google story i liked how you described the people who live there and describe the terrain. Although you still need to work on what they say and how long their sentences are.
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David S.
12/10/2013 12:03:06 pm
Anthony I enjoy your video about Italy because it was all about pizza and now I think I want to go to Italy.
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David S.
12/10/2013 12:12:10 pm
Rashad I enjoy your video about Jamaica Because you told what colors of the flag were.Which that gave us a good hint.
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Cynthia
12/10/2013 12:55:31 pm
Claudia I liked your story about Mexico because it had good points.But it needed punctaution.
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Shane
12/10/2013 01:40:38 pm
I liked your story on mexico you just have to work on your details.
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Shane
12/10/2013 01:45:25 pm
Ricardo I like your story on mexico but you have to work on adding details.
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Shane
12/10/2013 01:46:42 pm
Riley I think yor story on greece was great ecsept you need to tell more about greece.
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Rashad
12/10/2013 09:54:24 pm
Cynthia i liked our story about France. Next time you should add more details, and tell the person the country.
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Rashad
12/10/2013 10:00:04 pm
Anthony I really liked your Google docs story about Italy. But next time you should make your sentences longer.
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Isaac
12/10/2013 11:07:53 pm
Katie i love you story you made it alibi toe longer but it was good.
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Bess
12/10/2013 11:25:53 pm
Rocio,
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Bess
12/10/2013 11:32:04 pm
Riley,
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Brisa
12/10/2013 11:47:20 pm
Jonah, II like it that you told us hints like how far the the place is. You kind of need to work on describing the place.
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Ricky
12/10/2013 11:54:15 pm
Shane I like your slide but you should check spelling next time.
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Ricky
12/10/2013 11:58:16 pm
Gus I like your slide but next time you should see if it makes sense and check your spelling.
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Matt
12/11/2013 12:01:41 am
Gus I liked that you had great dialogue and you made the conversation come to life, for me.
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Matt
12/11/2013 12:03:50 am
I think you need to have better punctuation and have more facts about your country.
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Matt
12/11/2013 12:05:04 am
Anthony you had a great decision for three people and you had great dialogue.
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Matt
12/11/2013 12:07:34 am
Anthony you need to have better punctuation and you might want more emotion.
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Brisa
12/11/2013 12:07:44 am
Mercedez, I like the way that you told us what kind of food does the place. You could put some cammas and more sententce in a box.
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JOnah
12/11/2013 12:12:17 am
Samuel I like your music and the coujntry you chase. You can improve on making it easyer and a better hook.
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Jonah
12/11/2013 01:41:17 am
Matt I liked your vidoe becuase you chose a cool place. I think you can improve by making it a little easer to guess the country.
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Rocio
12/11/2013 03:59:08 am
I enjoyed your video because you did goog on describing thingd.
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Anne
12/12/2013 11:14:37 am
I like how you made it sound like a real conversation. A learned a lot from your video but , you can check your grammar to make your video better.
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